The setting of the story feels natural. The more I am read, the more invested I get. The steamy are steamy enough to put you on edge xD. The dialogue never felt out the place. I'd say this could be something that can definitely expand Xuanhuan horizons for several readers.

A book with a great idea, just needs some more touch ups perhaps and we'll have ourselves a great book, keep it up author can't wait to see where this journey leads us.