literally I think Dawn is better than Misty misty just was not that good looking

I'm kind of confused like literally you're sending him to Marvel with all I'm understanding what I'm getting out of this situation is that he can use chakra but he can't use it for any other ability than those two abilities he can teleport for 10 distance but that can't be you know in hand so to me you've just killed your main character but I could understand the Restriction of like telepath he could be like all he can do is such emotions that would have made a sense that could have been the restriction for that telekinesis he could do telekinesis but it would require him to chakra he can't extend his teleportation which makes no sense because to me he seems like a Sitting Duck like I don't see any ability that's going to be useful teleporting just 10 m away is not very helpful and the two abilities from Naruto but cannot do any of their chakra seems useless you could have put restrictions on what ability he could have used for Naruto but I just don't see the point of this fanfiction like to me he has no useful abilities

this is who I think he should look like because I'm sorry Jeremy Gilbert was Crush growing up or Tyler Posey

and if he has to be manipulative to achieve that well I'm sorry yes to survive Vernon dursley in the movie Scared the far out of me the way he treated Harry Potter and I always do not consider Dumbledore a good person the way he let Harry get a few shows that he literally was just a sacrificial lamb and I never understood why Harry named his kids after Snape and Dumbledore because Dumbledore was just using them that's that's the case and Snape really was only helping because he was forced

I feel like this is a realistic response for Harry to have I mean and then he probably comes to the conclusion like you're saying these people never showed Harry any kindness so it does make sense that he's probably just going to be like well you know what I don't care it doesn't mean he's going to turn abusive towards them but I think he is going to eventually try to get out of that situation and leave that would make the most sense to me

I'm trying to figure out if he's gay or straight because I've not seen a love interest so far

and this is why I like anti-hero stories right here like for me for him to sit there and they like you can most go without 24 hours supervision like I'm sorry I'm an I am my own person I don't need supervision I'm not a bad person literally he helped them out that's one of the reasons why I never would have I mean if I was a superhero I would just not want anything to do with the Justice League because to be honest they acted like they had a saying everything they did get cocky with their powers I mean the way they treated the Young Justice kids you know it was always you know they didn't let them do anything on their own they brushed them off 24/7 they got in trouble because they sat there and kept brushing them off at the end of the day I rather would have been an antihero and just have nothing to do with Justice League now don't get me wrong I still think that the kid flash is a good person Robin is a good person all the younger but the older people when they always thought that they had a saying what they did they are their own person this is their own abilities so at the end of the day they really don't have a say over it in my opinion

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I have a loving hate relationship with Professor X because like how he's saying he's trying to guide him towards like he could sit there and just tell him that he wants him to be good you know how do good and help people and I think that's Kevin's mentality anyway even though it's discreet but just sit there and try to say that he needs to be guided that way I don't agree with also like Professor X is the type that he's primarily a light character he believes that what he does is always right in my opinion that that's just my thoughts and Magneto is a darker character I believe Kevin is a great character and I just hope that you write him that way I think it would be good for him to be cry mean he'll do good and stuff but that doesn't mean he wouldn't use his powers for his own you know he gets his powers and I don't know if that'll go over well with Charles that's just how I think it should play out I mean don't do I think that he still will like Professor X yes but do I think that he will follow his ideals to what he's thinking no

Okay so I'm trying to be understanding to you as the writer of this fanfiction but I'm not going I'm going to give you my honest of you on what you posted about where I'm just not going to update and I'm just going to drop the story because someone is sitting there nitpicking you're always going to have someone that's going to nitpick that's that's just a fact with anyone that writes fanfiction they're always going to be a person wants to open their mouth and say a bunch of bull crap so if that gets to you I'm sorry but you know what people are going to do that that's just like on the internet I'm frustrated with you more than more than the person because you let this person get to you so for me I'm kind of upset because you've got about a hundred and something chapters into the book that I really like to walk to read and you update but then you're going to be like oh well I'm not going to do this because a bunch of people are just pissing you off well you could always disable what I would assume the comments on here and continue to write if that's the issue but I think it's kind of weak on you that you can't sit there and just ignore it you want to make an excuse or I don't know it's to me you're just you're not being a strong-willed person

you know he could have just done a lot of phoenixes and he could have done unicorn for the land that he had and he could have done Hypocrites for the land he could have literally done Phoenix and Thunderbird and Dragons

sorry but I think the new arrowverse on the CW I liked the original just arrow that was on the Smallville TV show and first off better looking and I find my heroes as a person that watches a lot of stuff I like the boyish Man look and I think just hardly did it perfectly as Green Arrow what's his name just look too old in my opinion to be green arrow it looks like if he got hurt real bad in my opinion or if he got punched he wouldn't recover fast