Negative_Cosmos

oh and the comment was harsh because one guy gust cept on spamming 5 Stares and I couldn't gust give a 1 star because it was a good and enjoyable past time so I guged it harsh le normally I'd give it 4 stars ther are atleast 10 other fics better then this one in this site

it is a good fic if it weren't for it's horrible updating it would be 3.5 but it's current updating is stability and quantity is trash it has both au and original faith full stuff the only bad part in writing it has repetition in some parts and even then for how long it goes I can forgive it and it is not ai generated or atlest not completely I now that becose the mc dose random shit for the future remembers to try and do it and plus if ha can't get a lough out of it he brushes it of well enough writing quality is a 5 story development in this genere is hard posibal but hard The only options are have a main world wher you want to or have to survive or have some tipe of collectable you collect whil going through worlds to see your progress this dosent have either but I'd fell bad for giving it one star for that so il give it 2 caracter design is good but mainly the mc's every one gust goes along whit the mc most of the time that is one of the repetitions but becose mc is the caracter most Whel developed I'd give it 3 stars update stability is garbage to think it used to be grate I gave it 1 star world background it has unique au that do well together because of that and the fact the world background is hard in this ganera I'd give it 4 stars

it's a good fic and it tries to keep the story interesting but be whare it is not purely harry poter story but still I do recommend it it's a good fic

it's a good fanfiction I recommend it for the people who read favor_splendore coment pleas read my replay it explaines why what favor_splendore wrote while most of it being true exept fore the slop part for the early chapter it had to be so becose it would have bin a huge info dump that spaned more then 3 chapter's the next part is a spoiler for the boy world so skip it I don't want to spoile to much I get the fact the first few chapters may seam like are leading the fanfic into the teretori of slope but it starts getting good real fast after the boy world and even if the boys world the mc gust speed up every thing yes it had a chance to fail but the result in failing would be soldier boy didn't have time to make it to where the mc was so mc gust killed home lander and didn't kill soldier boy

gust read 5 or 10 chapters

not even getting into the fact it is a power fantasy where mc is op since chapter 1 becose that can be done whel but the fact they use jjk cal cursed energy mana and they call the police royal guard I have read good Chinese fictiones yes most are unreadable but the take at least 2 or 3 chapter too get ther or too show hints it will be unreadable but this one is unreadable since chapter 1

it's a good fic for now ,give it a try. i am not good at explaining so I won't. I am rating this at chapter 10 becose it's bin a while since a hxh fic showed up and I have high hopes that this won't be depresing or bland

sorry I wanted to put it in the spoilor section but I clicked sand by mistake

it is a great fanfic give it a try gust be ware of the fact after a few chapters it dose a info dump and the first game has only one problem the author says it's balatro but he dosent explain the fact it is mixed white whit slay the spire maping question markes and market's the second game has no problems and the third one is done the best only falw is he sais I combines scp whit another game but becose he dosent want I to become horror he finds creatures from other francises to make it less difficult for example he replaces shy guy whit enderman and peanut whit the stown angels from doctor who

yea but remembering names that sond the same to me makes it hard I'd rather exept fantasy names and by the whay I don't think any one is named naruto or vegeta theire both fantasy and they don't bother me