SD_Machine

Well, the first thing i want to clarify is that , i have read many novels, manuha, manhwa etc.., so i will be giving my review based on what i feel, i dont think i am an expert in this at all but, i think i have spend a lot of time reading stuff , so i have enough data to atleast analyze in detail. I wont write too much as english is my 3rd language and i am not too good in it, i will just put in points. Some points might have Spoilers. And one more thing - i have read till 700chps, so i and not giving points based after 50 or so chps What i loved - 1. MC family - MOM , DAD and little sisters interactions are good but MC big brother and sister feel weird, idk they dont do a shit and are their just for the sake of the story,No role and feel blank. 2. Character writing - author is talented in expressing and writing characters . Many characters feel alive, and i can feel the connection with them, but the problem is for every reader what matter most to them is the MC ,which is so poorly written- rather than him i can take 10 other side character names who can become the MC of this story. 3.story flow - i loved the pacing of the story, not too slow nor too fast 4.writing - i think author is wwy good in writing and expressing what he feels Thats all what i liked What i hated - 1. Power system - its just for show , idk whats going on, the top level monarch cant do a shit but suddenly a group of ragtags children having 5 level below them are much more overpowering, i get the idea that MC gave them skills but than what is the actual point of ranks 2. MC is so unlikeable - he cant do a shit, everytime he goes and instigate a monster 15 levels above him and than start collecting allies like pokemon to fight for him. 3. No logic behind MC and monsters interaction - he killed a monster whole family and the next few chapers the monster becomes so loyal to give his life for MC. 4. At first author wanted to portary that MC is weak and he will make strategy to fight monsters. - i mean its ok, iwas fine to hear it, - but in every situation all he do is just start running and beg his ally to help him, was the whole strategy part to just beg to his allies 5. The whole avtar concept which the children get after killing monster- its too much brain dead, many grandmaster are needed to fight a level 5 strong monster, at one side and on the other side 13 year old kids get a level 4-5 monster avtar in solteria , lol whats going on 6. Romance - one of the most dissapointing point, author just skipped this part almost but still thought to insert stupid ecchi scenes( like night time hugging scenes with 2 girls and lingeri etc) , i mean i dont hate ecchi scenes but if their is no romance then whats the point of them. MC dont like the girls while the girls also dont like MC in a romantic way, but they all doing ecchi scenes at night with no problem, just cuz MC gave them few skills . The whole thing is so illogical and retarded 7. World people are so dumb - everyone is fighting with long weapons like sword and spears but only MC 69th battalion is so smart to have guns , everyong else are so stupid to go and fight with sword and then die lol 8MC brain is empty and his personality is so much going left and right - he kills a lot of hight level monsters after begging and collecting allies then making them fight. But for almost 600 + chapters he cant deal with a stupid monarch who killed his host in previous life, and tells his family to lay low, and wait for right time. One side he is raring to fight a majin king in a few seconds on the other side he is laying low for 15 years to kill a stupid monarch, wtf is going on Conclusion - i can write maybe a 50 more things what i hated but its too much hassle, so i wont Just few words for author - wasted potential ,