I really like this story, i see some grammatical errors but it's fine overall for me, if you want to read this you should know that the story is slow in nature because of all the preparations the protagonist must do to just not die the first day and i really like that, the feeling of weakness is very human, the relationships around the protag are very good too, the one with kota is cool. it's the fist Highschool of the dead fanfic that i read and it's very good, so good luck in the writing author. So have a nice day everyone!