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The_Venerable_one1dPosted.author i personally feel the novel ending not complete like what happend after the huge powerup and second gate thing...did he win the fight with deus guy what happend after second gate . its feels like novel went from 0 to 98 gradually but came to stop abruptly at 99 ...without ever being completely 100% , please reply
- The_Venerable_one2dCommented
hold up .. what do you mean by ' squirt '?
He aimed the tip at Xiao Wu and shouted, "Squirt!" - The_Venerable_one2dCommentedHe must land stably; he can't fall to the ground, let alone make a spectacle like the X special team did, falling in all sorts of strange ways.
- The_Venerable_one7dReplied to Zeke_Arkhadiaxz"Arias Markovic." The young man responded in a quiet, deep voice that radiated confidence.
- The_Venerable_one7dCommented'Power Rangers...? No way, fuck that shit...!'
- The_Venerable_one9dCommentedLooking up at the mirror once more Daniel thought to himself that he looked almost like Archer from his death at the end of the Unlimited Blade Works Route, the only thing missing from that image was the lack of any tanned skin.
- The_Venerable_one9dCommented
*shot
"You died on the 12th of May, 2019. You were shoot protecting the woman behind the exchange counter." The light brightened as the voice spoke to Daniel. - The_Venerable_one9dCommentedin thoughts I need to be Hexagonal Warrior What do i need Attack Defence Speed Intelligent Range and energy Attack Not noticable Defense Not Noticable too Speed same as before Intelligent…Appraisal Status and process all uses Knowledge range none and energy hmm Little…
- The_Venerable_one9dCommented
speak in human terms bruh ...its like "cup is round , round is ball , ball go fly, cup is fly"
in thoughts I need to be Hexagonal Warrior What do i need Attack Defence Speed Intelligent Range and energy Attack Not noticable Defense Not Noticable too Speed same as before Intelligent…Appraisal Status and process all uses Knowledge range none and energy hmm Little… - The_Venerable_one9dCommented
so confusing ....which is dialogue which is narration ..its like im suddenly reading a badly fked up chinese translated novel
Mordo Who tried the power of spells Before Yelled Don't contempt it's Stronger than what it looks the other Sorcerer Heard that they didn't need Mordo Word's This Spells Doesn't Look good from Glance In blink of an eye The ball's Arrived Infront of the Sorcerer in fast Speed. - The_Venerable_one9dCommented
xier (akhashic records owner): i should have fking dropped him in nearby blackhole ??(author): u know this is only chapter 2 right ... mc:
"I was with a friend, had a fight, and he left me alone after abandoning the car. I'm quite lucky to have noticed this town; otherwise, I would have died of thirst," Alvis fabricated a lie, his expression filled with despair. - The_Venerable_one9dCommented
bob uchicha seems better
"Arias Markovic." The young man responded in a quiet, deep voice that radiated confidence. - The_Venerable_one10dCommented"You don't have to worry about that Jase, no prison could ever hold me for too long." I remarked, talking from both facts and experience.
- The_Venerable_one11dReplied to Joao_Pires
- The_Venerable_one11dCommentedTouching his bare head, Link sighed.
- The_Venerable_one20dCommented
please put "......." these in convos happening b/w characters . also either stick a 1st or 3rd person POV . its a good concept but how u wrote made me unable to read. if u can refer those popular novels man . adios
Heading to the next room there were a couple rusty looking keys sitting on a desk in the corner and there was a keyhole in one of the walls. The rest of the room seemed pretty empty. - The_Venerable_one20dCommented
what do u mean uncle suddenly isn't he just a bandit
Uncle Hang and I sat opposite each other, our eyes locked in silent competition as we prepared to play Fan-Tan. - The_Venerable_one23dCommented[ You have obtained [Endless Supply of Downloadable E-books, PDFs, Articles and Fanfictions] ! Note: These are all copies of the original and are in fact paid for. ]
- The_Venerable_one29dCommentedMain Weapon Elective (Full score 60): Heavy Machine Gun: 17
- The_Venerable_one30dCommented
wheres part 1 and part 2
Chapter 161: Millennium-level Dark Demon Evil God Tiger(Part 3)