Sexy storyline . Good grammar. And its a unique idea for douluo dalu novels. I highly recommend you to read this. Im going to support you author. So don't stop.

Its a good concept . I have been wanting to read a similar book since ages . The writing is good with no grammatical errors . World building and the rest are still not full revealed . But i like the premise . So i will be supporting you and hope its what i expect .