Azure_Sky_8769

Decent. Obito and black zetsu dont feel very genuine for some reason

Characters lack depth in my opinion. I feel like he is just existing and doesn't really struggle much. Not really a serious review, just kinda how I felt. The writing structure seems good though.

Hi, author here, My first time writing a novel. If you have any feedback I would appreciate it as long as it is constructive. Thank you for your support and understanding!