"Itai" means "It hurts" in Japanese[img=recommend]

Hello everyone! Cheeky author here😝 This is a non-ex contract, so this story is currently being posted on a secondary account! And, of course I'd give my story five stars! Is it possible to not be biased?🙃 I really am proud of this one, as it is my first published novel and it's for sure a good read for all fantasy-action enthusiasts. Don't believe me? Why don't you see for yourself? 😉 I ask of everyone not to give up on this story just because it was paywalled too early. Trust me, if I could take it back, I would. It was probably the biggest mistake I have ever made as a webnovel newbie author on my part. I'll immensely appreciate all your feedback and blessings. Since it would be literally impossible to navigate through every chapter manually to react to your comments or perhaps answer your questions, consider this place as a thread where you can ask your questions and get replies as soon as I see them! Alternatively, you can follow me and hit me up on Twitter or X or whatever the fuck it's called nowadays🤣. Account: ThisIsChiyo Finally, my discord server is lonely😫. I know I can't send the discord link here but I guess you could look it up on my Twitter/X. Looking forward to getting to know you all. Until we meet again, take care of yourselves. Love you all🙏💙

Early review! This really is a breath of fresh air. There's not much to say since there isn't enough chapters to really give my overall thoughts, but for now, I just know this would be a superb story. It has this poetic feel to it with a mixture of something that just lure me into the plot. Great work, and keep writing![img=strong]

The story is great, unique its own right. My only genuine gripe about it is the writer's upload schedule. Like wtf? I need more! A little tip as well: try breaking your paragraphs for a more visually appealing sight for your readers. Also, I encourage you to do periodic proof readings of your work. It could be every volume, every 50+ chapters or whatever schedule type that fits you, because I detected a few typos here and there. Overall, it's a pretty decent read. Highly recommend[img=recommend]

I came into this novel with high expectations based off the reviews it got, and it did not disappoint. Right off the first chapter, I just kept going and going and going til I hit the paywalled chapter. This is my early review, and I'm here to tell you that you won't be disappointed. Kudos, author. Love this work so much![img=recommend]

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By the pure penmanship alone, you can tell the experience this man must have conjured all these time. I have no complaints whatsoever. Is it the storyline, character development or the overall pacing? Everything's just a chef's kiss. This is an amazing novel thus far, and I highly recommend it. Keep it up!

Nah, the author cooked in this one right here. It has been a hot minute since I've seen a story that has made me cry and shriek for joy at the exact same period of time. Your storytelling, the way you work your magic with your pen is godly by all means. I love how this story is going. Can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Keep up the good work![img=update]

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Remember to donate powerstones and give feedbacks. I will always appreciate them in my own way. Thank you so much. We enter a new arc in the story!

Remember to donate powerstones, send gifts and feedbacks! It boosts my morale to make more chapters for you all!

Hi everyone! Author here Who has made it this far? Comment down below.

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Nah I gotta know what happens next[img=nervous]

I came into this novel with mixed feelings as I did not know what to expect. But somehow, you just managed to exceed my expectations. This is great! I was not bored at all, so much so that I forgot about everything else just to read your work, Author. You'll do great. I know it.

If this story doesn't deserve 5 stars then I don't know what does😫 There is a lot going perfectly in this story that draws you to long for what comes next. The grammar and storytelling does it for me. I have no notes really :) Just keep doing what you do, Author[img=recommend]

This is genuinely one of the few great novels I've read in a while. Right off the bat, I was hooked by Emily's story. Keep writing, Author. You're doing just fine![img=update]