Chiyo_Kobayashi

This book really has no flaws. This is an early review but I know I wouldn't take back my words... I love the characters, both the main and supporting characters. They all have their unique personality that makes me want to read this story till its very end. Good work author. Keep writing...

Early review! I must say I'm a sucker for this kind of genres and I love the historical/mythological references madei n the story as well as the language diversity and overall story settings. You have the vision, and I'm here for it. Keep it up🫴💙🫂

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"Itai" means "It hurts" in Japanese[img=recommend]

Early review! This really is a breath of fresh air. There's not much to say since there isn't enough chapters to really give my overall thoughts, but for now, I just know this would be a superb story. It has this poetic feel to it with a mixture of something that just lure me into the plot. Great work, and keep writing![img=strong]

The story is great, unique its own right. My only genuine gripe about it is the writer's upload schedule. Like wtf? I need more! A little tip as well: try breaking your paragraphs for a more visually appealing sight for your readers. Also, I encourage you to do periodic proof readings of your work. It could be every volume, every 50+ chapters or whatever schedule type that fits you, because I detected a few typos here and there. Overall, it's a pretty decent read. Highly recommend[img=recommend]

I came into this novel with high expectations based off the reviews it got, and it did not disappoint. Right off the first chapter, I just kept going and going and going til I hit the paywalled chapter. This is my early review, and I'm here to tell you that you won't be disappointed. Kudos, author. Love this work so much![img=recommend]

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