batster

Overall nice story, please use grammarly or some other grammar app to check after yourself. The most frequent mistake is just simply the misspelling of “weapons”. It’s not “weopons”.

You're mind is geared in a very particular way...

I truly do hope you continue this novel even after the original chapters end - this is a fabulous plot.

As far as I can tell, the layout issue is only on phone for some reason. PC it looks alright.

intelligent or intelligible