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I like this development (I don't have to suffer chapter 1-100 Grid)

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I'd be a lot more cohesive if you'd stick to one style of dialogue, so like only "" or - - (In WN it's a lot more common to see "") And for thoughts, generally, you'd separate it from the dialogue " "/- -. So, instead of "" you can do single quotes like ''.

Thanks!

Absolutely recommended!

In a world where Jinx invents ChatGPT...

Overall nice story, please use grammarly or some other grammar app to check after yourself. The most frequent mistake is just simply the misspelling of “weapons”. It’s not “weopons”.

You're mind is geared in a very particular way...

I truly do hope you continue this novel even after the original chapters end - this is a fabulous plot.