Hiddenboy76

This is an interesting story. I look forward to future chapters.

I’ve updated and rewritten the story recently, so the reviews are from the earlier version about two years ago. Hope you’ll enjoy the new version!

It’s normal that Veldora’s personality didn’t change, because he was more than 6,000 years old. On the other hand, Sandeep was only around 40. Due to this, even after their soul merge, Veldora’s personality remained mostly unchanged, as he had over 6,000 years of experience.

“I’ve decided that Arc 1 will end in Chapter 21. After that, I’ll begin Arc 2 of this fanfic, which will focus on Veldora’s training, his travels around the world, and the developing relationship between Luminous and Veldora.”

“Well, yeah, but I kinda want to give Veldora all the unique skills from the Sin series. The problem is, I couldn’t really figure out a proper way for him to get them, so I just went with the easiest route and tossed Sloth his way. You could call it a plot hole— …or maybe just me being lazy enough to roleplay Sloth myself.” 😅

waiting for next chapter

no currently veldora have 1 unique skill

"I mistakenly wrote Velzard as Primordial White."

"Yes, he died at the hands of Velzard multiple times, but because he was a True Dragon, he revived himself."

"Yes, I mistakenly wrote 'decade' instead of 'half a decade.'"