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The only good thing here is, that - this MC doesnt cry like little girl about his new location all the time. And here, he transmigrated up in a really bad place - with mad scientists. Comparted to that MCs who - start in safe place; with parents who feed and provide him with everything; also new body immediately has the ability of a new world (like magic if HP, Chakra if in Naruto, mutations if in Marvel, and e.t.c.) Moreover, they usually also receive a pack of cheats, or a System - one of system is enough for endless evolution and divinity. But thats Macs cry about his new location without pause... over dozens of chapters
Parle... Pari...par... Parley... A parley? Yes parley, negotations!
< With Palpatine voice -> Goood... > .It would be cool if he fake his own death. Get strength and immortality from various things. And then - begin to create the legend of the Legendary Pirate King, who has always existed, and become aweosome like Jack Sparrow.
wow... dodge a bullet. Ty for honest review, bro. That, how author reacted to your comment... confirmed diagnos of that story, for me. Hah, WN never changes. These insults to the readers. Old paste about - its a long story, blah blah blah, give it a chance and read another 10,000 thousand chapters... There is a reason why, in a good story - the first chapters are the MOST important, they should hook the reader and give him a reasons to keep reading. And if this is not the case... It means that the author obviously does not understand the basic principles of creating stories, and nothing better not come in another chapters. That is why, the original Fate novel - begins as it begins. So Now Fate starts? It start from gorgeous music + a battle scene + flashing lightning + a beautiful Saber. And after it, we are transferred to the even more beautiful In. More beautiful music. Story immediately give us lore about magicians, show us the achievements of the magicians. And this is exactly why we began to read the story about magic and battles. The original author understands perfectly how stories should work and gives us exactly that we expected...If instead - a gorgeous prologue with Rin, a shower, and the magical call of the legendary hero. We get a prologue - from pathefic hero, who just cry abut his problems... Well then, the original Fate would be a poorly written work... But its good, that this is not right.
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nice, smart MC
This is not a big price to pay for - a System, a young and healthy body, start in safe place(not right into a battlefild), the possession of mesterial energy - Chakra, meta-knowledge and knowledge of the canon of the future, possibility in new world get artifacts/bloodlines/divine eyes that can give you even more powers at divinity level...
or, it would be cool to learn - how to fly on cloud, like little Goku... Moreover, he has a System - which very quickly gives him skills, and can give him endless development potential... Well, if he started as a very weak resident, with a bad and sick bloodline, without a chance to become stronger - then ok, he have a reason to cry... But here he just a crying without reason.
wow... if before, i just a joke about lack of intelligence. But now, MC really does not have a brain. Or author does not know the lore of Naruto world, then - how can you write a story without knowing anything about the world?! Anyway, in short - Chakra = physical energy + spiritual/mental energy. That is a reason - why in the canon, we see clans with a large amount of mental energy -> Nara/Yamanaka who are geniuses/telepats. So in conclusion - the MC can increase Chakra with statistics -> that is, he must also increase his physical energy and mental (intelligence), because Chakra consists from them.
The Time of plot armors... But only, if you are a main hero