Derami

Good idea and development, however it has AI grammar and it can be felt, alot of redunant repeating and flowery words, it just feels unnatural to read

Honestly wth, even without 5th ring he should crush them... i mean they are avg lvl 28 and he is 70+

Great idea, logical. If you have low innate spirit, the best path would definetly be the direction of 'evil spirit master' especially in Douluo 1 as here they are not hunted just by awakening a dark spirit as in Douluo 2. Going into devouring path is realistically the only way, as long as you don't eat hearts raw and kill infants... I mean you could use blood of spirit beasts or devouring them, even not killing is enough, just absorb some % then go to another place. At the same time you have to remember that evil soul masters were always much stronger and cultivates much faster, so as long as you use this power and dont get corrupted by it I say its a win

Too much hardwork from mc side, by having so many auxiliary techniques he should be able to identify a rich or powerful person on the planet and control him or simply impersonate him which will give him access to a multitude of resources readily available, then just take over a rogue trader and you can legally create your own dynasty and control planets and do whatever you want

by the will of shounen plot armor

-_-, wth, 1.what is his magic doing exactly 2. why the heck he is fighting an elite moster on his 1st dungeon dive? until now it is constantly mentioned that the mc is smart, careful and lowkey, yet why he is fighting to death with a shitty sword as if its a cheap hothead shounen manga instead of running or retreating?

Why talking about politics if you have system, he should do his best to level, gain skills, learn magic and become immortal

true, but there are still clans and ninjas who should be able to use it easily: Jinchuuriki, Hyuga, Senju, Uzumaki, Uchiha, the fat Cho clan(I mean they are Yang specialists), Kaguya, Raikage line in Cloud, Hozuki the water guys in Mist, medics, some taijutsu specialists, some Yin clans. 1st group of guys should be able to use 50+ clones then other 10+ and even 3extra clones and that means you learn 4 techniques instead of 1, so much potential. It can also translate as training 20y instead of 5y and that is the bare minimum, yet only the mc uses it

Remind me, why would someone would go out of their way at night in a zombie world spending half night to go to a car that exploded to search it? what was he expecting? It exploded

In his place I would go learn to be a medic and researcher, easy path to transcendence. You can research and incorporate bloodlines, tailed beasts and at the end the dragon vein in Roran who has powers of time and space