The truth is that I like this story and I think it could use a revision, to improve its quality in terms of narrative and writing, improving its experience for more demanding readers, although personally I think that only a few things need to be improved and that The plot It's good.

The chapter is good, the premise is interesting, I want more of this, I hope it doesn't fall, because I really feel like this has potential. I've read several novels but this is one of the most promising I've seen, it just needs to keep updating and show brilliance.

Take your time, it's better than canceling.

It's always good to take a break, it helps both mentally and physically, to rest and relax, to beat up the trolls.

Thanks for chapter

2. The name is inconsequential, what matters is the nickname that his teammates and antagonists give the MC in the future.

There is also the fact that by silencing Maxi an inconsistency would be generated, because in a certain part of the story the protagonist shows that the objective is for Maxi to realize that he is really good and does not really seek to be a supervillain, rather some kind of antihero.

From what I understand of the protagonist and from how the plot has developed so far, I would not silence Maxi's soul, because it would condemn him to be in the void of the subconscious, where, according to the nameless woman. you won't see, hear or feel anything, which is the same as torturing him, causing his consciousness to deteriorate from being alone without any interaction, also the fact that he took his body from him, and finally, that he doesn't align with the goals and the antihero character of the protagonist.

A Jedi doesn't work because of their moral and ascetic doctrines, while a Sith also doesn't work because of their evil and rampant nature. But, on the other hand, presenting a love interest like an elf or Fay mentioned in other comments would be more organic and easy to justify, due to the characteristics of the Mc and his origins, etc.

A long time looking for something decent from sanguinius and your work appeared, which is very good, I hope it continues, greetings. [img=update]

Missing chapters from 11 to 18