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This fanfic is a pleasant surprise; the protagonist feels well-developed without being flat or pretentious, the interactions between the characters feel fluid, and the story's development so far has been enjoyable.

Yes, continue with this book

The story is interesting and entertaining, and I think it fulfills its objective of telling a simple story. It's not pretentious and it captures the reader's attention well, at least in my opinion.

I like the story; every day I look forward to a new chapter

Personally, I think it's a very good fic, although it's slow, but I think it's consistent with the narrative itself that is told, and the translation is very good and makes the fic enjoyable.

I really hope you keep translating because I think it's a really good translation that makes the fic itself good

Thanks for the chapter, will you continue translating Overlord?

There are several inconsistencies in this chapter, such as that at one point he mentions having memories of DC, but in the next moment he completely ignores them in his personal reflections, acting as if he had none, in addition to stating that "none of that was real", so his memories were not as ambiguous as he claimed, as to not dismiss them as a simple dream, beyond the fact that the veracity of those same memories of another life is not questioned, finally the feelings he expresses towards Alfred are very inconsistent regardless of whether they have metanarrative knowledge or not.

The fanfic is a power fantasy where the protagonist is given treasures that make him ultra powerful, and from the 2nd to the 7th chapter it is basically an overload of information, other than that I think it is enjoyable, although the real story is just beginning I think it delivers what it promises.

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