Ms_Squirtle
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Ara ara~~ Naughty writer here, calling on all cultured heroes. https://forum.questionablequesting.com/members/ms-squirtle.137927/
2023-03-31 JoinedGlobal
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Ms_Squirtle21dReplied to AbanmaganCh 19 Chapter 19 - Another Trophy Earned II- Ms_Squirtle30dPosted
Personally, its too much descriptive info in each chapter, slow paced and still a lot of typos. Too little dialog to carry along the character development. Also repeating explanations of the same thing even from different characters is just repetative. good plot idea tho, interesting to see where this can go. 🙏
- Ms_Squirtle30dCommented
Driftbark? 🤔
"Ah! Where are my manners, these fine people are delegates from Driftbark in the west, this is Lady Stane and these are her faithful guards." The prince pointed out the natives. - Ms_Squirtle1mthCommented"What in the Hero God's name is this?!" Kavius shouted, his throat gulping and his hands oily. "H-How… so tender and smooth! It melts in my mouth!"
- Ms_Squirtle2mthCommented
wish i had a pink room 😣
The walls were painted a soft pink, with RGB lights lining the edges of the ceiling. Cute plushies adorned the wall shelves alongside a collection of figurines. Most of the figures depicted roaring muscular men with blonde hair. - Ms_Squirtle2mthCommented
i identify as rich...
"I've got plenty of savings, and I sure don't wanna hear Marcus snorin' like a bull in his sleep," Hunter said. "And don't you worry 'bout the job. I've got everythin' planned out and ready to roll. In fact, let's go on a Europe tour next summer. I bet Annie will love seein' them big ol' castles." - Ms_Squirtle2mthCommentedAnthony gawked the same way, having never in his life faced something like this. "W-What? What match? Is that even legal?"
- Ms_Squirtle2mthReplied to MisterImmortal[A/N: See Hunter and Hector here.]
- Ms_Squirtle2mthCommented
kavius, somewhere:
"The court also observes without a doubt that the Redcapes did not conduct a proper investigation under Captain Arthur's leadership. A man's life is priceless, and in this case, it was a man who was blessed by the Hero Gods. Based on clear prejudice of the accused's Akursed status, the Redcapes pursued him and unjustly arrested and prosecuted him. For this, this court will recommend the Redcapes to withhold one month's salary of Captain Arthur Brooks and Second Lieutenant Mei Varnog. - Ms_Squirtle2mthCommentedHunter's eyebrows lifted, his detective instincts kicking in. "Thirteen babies gone missin' in a month? That's... too dang many! You still out lookin' for them? That's just plain stupid. Them first three hours are crucial, and after twenty-four, the odds of findin' them drop to near nothin'. And with them being babies… That cuts down the chances even more... Ah, I'm… just rambling."
- Ms_Squirtle2mthCommented"The book is the treasure of the Gods! Protect it with your life, Hunter! Don't ever tell anyone about it," Kavius seriously advised.
- Ms_Squirtle2mthReplied to MisterImmortal[A/N: Check out Hunter and Kavius here or on Discord.]
- Ms_Squirtle2mthReplied to Lorddagz
i'd love to see that tbh
"You cursed thug! One more step in this holy temple, and your splattered head will give a sacrificial salute to the Hero God!" Came an old, raspy voice of a man filled with rage. - Ms_Squirtle2mthPosted
- Ms_Squirtle2mthCommentedCh 2 7. A Thunderous Battle
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- Ms_Squirtle5mthReplied to Benoit_ValtinCh 4 Chapter 4: Redheads & Crisis