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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    The author is quite good at writing despite this being theirs first book(i might be wrong) and he also spoils the story by using numbers and that was down only one time. {6:13} both of these numbers are seen as bad in numerology (i am not that good with numbers) and till now the story seemed pretty good so her is my review. So author good luck for the future and keep on moving forward

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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    Author after reading this chapter ....I think you need some help

    Ch 11 NTR?
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    Bro what!?

    Chapter 11: NTR?
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    It was a rushed written arc but i think the author will improve him/herself in the future and the characters were...nice but not fleshed out

    Ch 10 Welcome to my daily life monster.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    Author no need to worry you can say whatever you want

    " Ahem! Let's continue. I have also confirmed it that Lucy and Javi both did it many times. But he wasn't satisfied. But one day he felt the want to do it and saw his girlfriend's younger step sister 'Green'. That day no one was there at the house. So he took the chance and starter to [Redirected] with his girlfriend's step younger sister..." he stops and let's the other two people present there absorb the given information. Alex had a look of disgust and aurora didn't say anything just clench her hand , ballin a fist. Since she also has a daughter she can place herself on Charlotte's place.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    thats a lot of stuff

    " Navigating the aftermath of a tragedy can lead individuals down unpredictable paths. following the devastating murder of their son, coming to terms with the unthinkable, individuals often grapple with profound grief, complicated emotions, and behavioral changes. in the quest for semblance, the peculiar behaviors exhibited by someone close to the victim can be perplexing. from withdrawal to uncharacteristic outbursts, understanding these actions becomes crucial not only for emotional closure but also in the context of the investigation. The loss of a child is an indescribable pain that can fracture even the strongest of individuals. Grief, a complex and deeply personal experience, manifests in myriad ways. Those close to the victim may find themselves in a state of shock, struggling to comprehend the magnitude of their loss. This shock often gives way to a range of emotions, from intense sorrow to anger and disbelief. In the wake of such trauma, it is not uncommon for individuals to exhibit behaviors that seem out of character, stemming from the overwhelming weight of their emotions. But -" He stopped ot take a breathe in and starts again.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    Agreed with him here

    " well my friend I can't agree here. For me it's thighs. A thick one. To get a blow from a thick thighs is my dream. As they say ' Thick thighs save lives' " Jin said about him type.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    boys will always be boys

    " Yup a girl with thick ass is my ideal type. " Alex said to Jin who grinned.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    So besically super human

    Cube is a organization which experiment's on human potential. They isolates kids at young age and nurtures them. They are taught things that kids couldn't be able to learn and they are far more ahead from the kids at their age. The kids at cube are capable of doing quantum physics, measuring theory, Lubegs integrals and many more. At the age of 5 a average cube student is able to do highschool level question 's and various martial arts such as karate , muay Thai, kung fo kick boxing etc. At the age of 10 a average cube student is able to do college level question 's and learn at least 10 martial arts. But the things is no one is able to survive till the age of 10. They most definitely drops out at the age of 8 or 9. The only one who are able to go past age 10 is Javi and Alex. But Alex is different from Javi. For Javi he can be said ,he barely survived. Meanwhile for Alex's case he is able to complete it all. He was able to out do the organization itself. That's why he is called {masterpiece of cube} and Javi is just someone who survived which itself is a big feat.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    And the plot hole got filled up with plot

    After Kiyora Jin called me and wanted to ask me some questions,I didn't expect him to ask me these type of question. It seems he now knows about my secret identity which I wanted him to know. Though I think that ryoma did something so that Kiyora Jin can know about my identity because it was completely removed. The concert of [cube] was completely erased by those who invested in cube.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    Overall nice but I think the fact that such information could have been found out by someone like our mc seems like a plot hole. But great chapter

    Ch 9 The case is closed.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    goated acting

    "what do you mean by those guys? If you are talking about my friend's then can you take me where they went,quz those bastards forgot to take me with them and I got fucking lost." I told the taxy driver,who nodded his head.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    3 chapters is all it takes

    Chapter 9: The case is closed.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    was this really necessary ?

    Shit! Wrong reference.see you soon. Bye. Moms calling.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    Haha noice

    This day was exhausting. This ends the 2nd day out of 14 days. He only has 12 days. So how will he start the investigation. Stay tuned to know what will happen next in Dragon ball z. .
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    Do japanese really have that kind of turms?

    "it seems he didn't give you every information about this case. I suppose he is what you japanese call «daughter-con» or doting and overprotective father. Let me give you the whole info" she said.
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    Well rest in peace

    ‹I forgot to tell you that you only have 3 weeks before your time runs out. So try solving this case in the said time. Your dear father-in-law›
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    It seems the author did his fair share of research on the country he will choose. Nice

    Ch 5 Peace is stolen
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    Chapter was great and all but the author should stop putting the characters into the murder mystery without any build up

    Ch 4 Meeting mother and father
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  • FreebiesFreebird
    FreebiesFreebird5mth
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    From now on i will stop commenting thank you

    Ch 3 Old face
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