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SailorMars_80506 months ago
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It's all an illusion, her true nature is just a greedy money-grubber!
True Heiress Cuts Ties, The Marquis Household Bitterly Regrets
History · Su Zixin
SailorMars_805010 months ago
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taking
He knew better than anyone why he was talking this girl home.
Mind Reading: Hidden Bigshot Fails to Hide
Urban · Hardy1j
SailorMars_8050a year ago
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They were ahead of others as they had not come back to their senses.
Apocalypse: Transmigrated General’s Daughter Uses Space to Survive
Sci-fi · FlamingHorse
SailorMars_8050a year ago
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This sentence seems our of place.
They were ahead of others as they had not come back to their senses.
Apocalypse: Transmigrated General’s Daughter Uses Space to Survive
Sci-fi · FlamingHorse
SailorMars_8050a year ago
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correction: they were lucky
The two didn't stand on ceremony and took everything in the warehouse. After leaving the warehouse, they opened the back door to check what was at the back, and we were lucky to discover two full gasoline tanks.
Apocalypse: Transmigrated General’s Daughter Uses Space to Survive
Sci-fi · FlamingHorse
SailorMars_8050a year ago
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Reya said
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Return of the General's Daughter
History · Azalea_Belrose
SailorMars_8050a year ago
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Correction: She immediately stood up
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SailorMars_8050a year ago
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correction: her daughters face
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SailorMars_8050a year ago
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Correction She guessed
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SailorMars_8050a year ago
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I would suggest using the word 'coldly' less
"Elder Gu, you should be aware that a ginseng may be the least sought after herb but the quality of the one you're asking me about is not that simple. Not to mention the specialty of the one in my hand, what is to say that the cauldron you promise is worth its exchange?" Coldly, she gazes at Elder Gu, and based on the others expression and reaction, she can tell that the ginseng is important to them.
Mystique Soul: A Cultivator's Flame
Fantasy · LuminaeLuna