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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

"Leonora and Atticus" not "Leonora and Alistair" turned abruptly, as Alistair is not present

Well, eyeglasses 👓😋

Shouldn't that read "she *realized* she would have preferred"?

"Fear and raged war within her" Is there a word missing perhaps?

I think this line is cut off from the previous paragraph.

Well, one would need to have at least a little bit of intelligence in the first place to lose it

this description is a thing of beauty

deservedly so