good luck with your exams!

Good catch. I was wondering what this was about. You might right

It would be pretty interesting if Ace managed to convince or influence Enel with his charisma to join him. I always entertained the thought of Enel joining a crew and how his personality would be funny to have in the Blue sea

Nathan for OC and Nagi for canon character

I do not mind honestly. You are ultimately basing off a source material to go on through your own version of story telling so its all good.

I love that they are arguing about who is the uncle there haha. Thanks for the chapter!

I've read the first 6 chapters so far and honestly I was hooked; this story does something that other stories often fail to do: it tells something, you can feel it in the words woven in each chapter, the way the serene teashop contrasts with the violence in Rukongai, the way the owner is described and seen through the eyes of others. It really is akin to a breath of fresh air after reading all those non-stop rushing fictions all over the app. Thanks author for this story, bookmarking and looking forwards to this journey.

tween is between 8 and 12

tween is actually apt here. Author probably means it as it is, you can look it up.

No problem. Just found out about this story, so far I really am enjoying it. Keep it up

I have to say first of all, when I began this story it was purely out of 2 main reasons: Not a harem and Enel being the character. Now, as I have read through every chapter updated so far, I have to admit I did not expect to enjoy this as much as I do. The author has taken the massive world of One Piece and expanded upon it with their own imagination, the way the tales are spun through the chapters, the lore is told and the characters interact have made this story one of my very favorite on this app and for that I thank you author.

As Maxime said, the accurate word would be Partez.