DaisukiFox

Sorry it's taking so long something happened to my co-writer and I don't want to continue without them otherwise it feel the same if it's just me writing it. I wish I could continue too... TvT lolz

What why do I need to go easy on you? You did exactly what I was hoping for! Thank you! I love it and I'm glad you love the quality of the fanfic too and that the characters are to your liking!

Hmm... gives too much exposition in the story. You don't want to narrate too much information because your reader will lose their train of thought so it's better to adopt the rule of 'show' don't 'tell'. Make it come up more naturally. I like the idea and it gives me Avatar the last Airbender vibes and MMO animes.