DrunkenGoose23

Hey it's been a long time but I've finally caught up. Unfortunately no matter how much i complain to the Webnovel support the chapters remain between 25-30 coins per chapter but I really wanted to catch up so i bit the bullet. Great chapter Huge fan of your work!

I don't have anything against the plot. good concept, it drew me because I'm interested and wanted to read it. The story is hard to follow, we've spent way too long at a convenient store, the characters exist in parallel to one another but aren't interacting with one another in a manner that humans would. the name of the main character isn't the same in any two chapters. what happened to the rest of the people bought at the auction? and many other questions that i don't care to list at this moment. Good luck with the book and your English. don't blame me when you can't write, you choose to do so, i wish you the best. I wouldn't do much better and English is my only language.

was this dropped?

fun concept held back by poor writing. move on it's not worth it.

I've read up to the other world, chapter 270's ish story is fine, based on previous experience every book gets a lot worse as soon as one of two things happen. Space or other world. every time it's 200+ chapters of story that no one cares about. now Trial is different that's good but that's cause we are anticipating it. not dropped in when we would rather be elsewhere. worried that the girls that should be central to the plot such as assassin girl and first kiss girl don't seem to be important to the author when some chick from other world is listed as the main girl. no hopeful but I guess I have to slog through the next bad story to find out what the important story is doing

well I suppose I have to ask now how many chapters does your book spend on the main character pooping? I hope zero.

Still bothers me that his first wife calls him Mr. Really throws off the vibe.

Just now realized this is the same author as God of Milfs. What happened? that story is great but this one. Shame.