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Because?. It's fantasy... But out of nowhere a virgin woman gives herself to a stranger
Bro, I really like your novel. The mc's personality seems appropriate to me for the stage where he performs. Please don't drop your novel, it's very good and I see a lot of potential.
You use 60 words, something you can say in 10. If you reduce the number of words, the story would have no end.
This guy's reaction is abnormal. Someone transfers him so much money and he says, well, let's go to sleep.