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Jordan_alucard1dCommentedCh 53 Chapter 50 : Learning To Cook In Magical Ways ( part 1 )- Jordan_alucard2dCommented
Why is it repeating
"Mike testing mike testing," I made my voice a little heavy and ominous to suit the dark image that I was carrying. And when I was satisfied with that, I touched the array placed upon the door. - Jordan_alucard2dCommented
More story and less “thoughts l” add them at the bottom comments maybe?
Man, I'm sorry this chapter has become 2000 words long due to my excessive talk - Jordan_alucard2dCommented
Definitely like the mythology
Demeter is one of the uncommon names. Demeter is a name from Greek mythology and means earthly mother. According to legend - Jordan_alucard2dCommented
Surprise 😮
But Masashi broke the deadlock while still looking at the sweaty Leon by saying, "Yes, boy, as you guessed, he is Masashi Masamura, or the first emperor, and you, boy, are one of my grandchildren." - Jordan_alucard6dCommented
Kirby
The raging fire inside the tornado moved toward Ren. Ren opened his mouth and increased his size. The fire tornado still was bigger than him, but except for eating the tornado, he started sucking it. - Jordan_alucard19dCommented
Hopefully went this way
Reuniting the parents arc - Jordan_alucard27dCommented
Just saw these pretty cool
[A/N: If you haven't seen Sakura Mansion in a complete picture, you can see it in AUX Chapter [Illustrations]. And also Aria's picture if you haven't seen it.] - Jordan_alucard27dCommented
Nice
Rin - Jordan_alucard27dCommented
Looks pretty ba
Erix - Jordan_alucard1mthCommented
Keep it simple with monster 🤷🏼♂️
[A/N: Do I show this type of monster format or the one I showed in Crimson Demon, like Strength, Agility, Stamina, Health, and Magic type?] - Jordan_alucard1mthCommented
Is ivita a guy or girl lol the he and she keep confusing me
Ivita prepared to rotate the Malsgo Desire Ring with her left hand. She was ready to give the ring two rotations before reciting the spell. - Jordan_alucard1mthCommented
Comma maybe?
The humpbacked old man, the tavern clerk cum waiter cum horse tender, who had been cowering and trembling in a corner as if terribly afraid, suddenly stood up. - Jordan_alucard2mthCommented
Come on now
Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! Adonis! - Jordan_alucard2mthCommented
Minus the die part
What an intense chapter. I hope you enjoyed the read. - Jordan_alucard2mthCommented
Necessary evil
- Alignment: Lawful Evil - Jordan_alucard2mthCommented
I hope he tries to sell it to the shop Rey got it at
It seemed luck hadn't fully abandoned this man yet, considering how valuable the ring seemed to be. - Jordan_alucard2mthCommented
No extra skill yet?
- Skills (Non-Exclusive): Nil - Jordan_alucard2mthCommented
Not a fan of this I get what writing about her doings when he wasn’t around but not the same chapters over
[Author's Note: This is the first chapter of a few I plan on writing that rehash Dyon's first meetings with Jade. The ~ represent sections taken verbatim from previous chapters I've written while the normal text are new and represent how matters play out from Jade's perspective. It'll be an interesting ride to see just how Jade went from pure hearted young woman to murderer and just what role Dyon played…] - Jordan_alucard2mthCommentedHearing his thoughts, somewhere an unborn child still in his/her dad's testicles shuddered in fear.