xeesoxee

where is the system, this idiot is already 10 chapters old

where is the system?

how many women are in his harem?

did he just tell the system?

What did you do so you stopped continuing your novel and why are you writing the same story but with a different title now

for character naming is really bad. not suitable to use Japanese name with cultivation background

klise

I've only read chapter 1 but I'm already disappointed, okay I'll stop reading this because I don't like anything that smells like a clone even if it's the main character, as for the story, I think it's interesting.

inconsistent cultivation stages

disgusting