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As much as I want to see Isabella and Miwen together, this does make more sense for now. All the times he said he was proud of her did make it clear he looked at her like she was family, and though it's true Miwen does go with the flow alot, it wouldn't make sense for him to just commit spiritual incest like that right off the bat. Isabella will have to break that image by showing she's her own person who can take care of herself and help Miwen in turn before they can get together, and on some level it looks like she understands that.
Miwen every time he gives everything he has to a girl and they fall in love with him again
Yoooooo I was waiting for a while for this, aint no way Isabella didn't fall in love after all that, but the payoff is so satisfying. Let's goooooo
I know it's probably very necessary for plot reasons for Isabella to suffer but argghhhhh, it's still not fun to watch. I think it's the mark of a good author that you made me care about Isabella this much.
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It suddenly occurred to me, what's happening with Nissa at the moment, and Elizabeth's attempts to recruit her?
you mean chapter 81?
Brother this upload speed is killing meeeeeee please go back to a chapter every 3 days. I'm fine with a slight reduction in quality or the presence of errors you're too much of a perfectionist my guy, it was great then and I'm sure it could continue to be.
See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
Goodness what a twist, this is what peak fiction looks like. Poor Isabella though 😥. I feel bad for Pamela too, used as a sow to produce fresh meatbags to inhabit for Albris. Wonder what will happen with her and how she'll feel. If I were you author, I think it's worth adding how she reacts to everything and what steps she takes next. She COULD be just a side character if you want, but I think it would be cool to have her persist in rebuilding house Evretis, possibly with Miwen's help.