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well... of what i know the 3rd ninja war dured 9-10 years but meh

a good novel but for me it is incomplete i refuse to say that it is complete yes there is a decent ending but not like that it is like something cut it but well good work on reworking something chineish like this and make it more readable good work!

overcomplicated and chinese vibes often pop out like "qi" "qi luck " "divine armor" "divine weapon" some times the names change like orochimaru become yoru or yoru become yoruichi or shishui yoru etc the story is ok but to overcomplicated too much power struggle and politics if i wanted to read a political novel i wold have just gone to youtube and watch trump go bonkers on someone that at least is fun a shame really wtf the system after the first 75 chs basically disappears and the power level of the mc become a mystery if he can buy talents he cold have buyd many more like cmon minato reflex or tobirama genius brain... but well a shame

are you on drugs?!?!?!?!? GOGOGOGO CONTINUEEEEEEEE

the third hokage was the most retard hokage in history maybe even the weaker of the 7 even tsunade is more powerful then him! and she is a medical ninja! he was so retarted that he allowed danzo to try to assassinate him dont remember 2-3 times? allowed uchiha to become so ostracized to the point they wanted to rebel! he was even stupider then hashirama and that was an achivment itself cause hashirama was asura reincarnation! and as for the most powerful? well see this and i dont even need to explain

no i really cant the cringe the china vibe the china the chinese gags... the overcomplications of chineses... even eating become a means to belittle the mc... you cant mix naruto and china vibes this much