regressor123

Oh I smell romance

First of all I find the novel good and honestly it's a bit early to write review but still , I read first 6 chs and from it I feel like powersystem (add a bit more elements ) can be improved a bit as well as descriptions of mc doing things and the feelings of mc feels a bit bland but this are just small complaints as the novel is just getting started. Good work

Good 2nd chapter, if I have to give suggestion then I think the more work should be done on powersystem like it sounds a bit weird for it to be initial stage and initial rank , well but not any complain

It's good 1st ch