not bad kid..not bad,not bad at all Plus the fact you're a newbie says you've still got a Long way to go if you want to be known but in all I'll say it again,not bad kid..

author here, please give this book a try,if it's jus two chapters,I promise you won't regret,I need your support and ratings,thank you, author out

Awesome storyline you've got there, just keep on going an don't give even if no one knows about your story yet, don't give up Derek,you can do this,just have self confidence