Luci_Hellsblade

That kiss would've been perfect as the music fades in the background but maybe a bit too soon

I was skeptical at first, been through lot of translation books and was almost on the verge of losing it and I found this. And boy oh boy the story just hits the right spots. Something New than same copy pasta stuff and going good

Dude, it's your story. Go crazy with it😉

Thanks 🫡

After reading it again from the start I realized ... This shit is confusing af but this is a shameless review so... 5 starts And ngl, it makes me lose my braincells just to get through the 20 chaps, can't imagine what y'all kids without patience will go through Story doesn't make sense and you need to be hella big brain for it to make sense It's like playing 4D chess while being in a badminton tournament on a deck of cards. Reaching levels of bullshittery that shouldn't be possible

Good stuff. The patience was worth it reading through all that while almost wanting to punch the damn MC but boy was I wrong Character Development going good Adding unnecessary stuff cause of the damn restriction of 40 words and again Good Stuff 🤌 P.S. Writing this for the second time cause spelling mistakes (autocorrect ain't doing it's job for some reason)

Didn't even notice it😭 But still gonna leave it there cause why not🤣

Hang in there my man and see you later

You'll figure it out I believe in you