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The story was very interesting, it was my first time reading such story, and it was refreshing, no heavy elements yet but the drama and pacing to the story was a *chief kiss!* it has a very high potential and I highly recommended it. To more ink, author!

it's my first reading such genre and it was very overwhelming in the sense that very informative. The story was well planted and we'll pacing, world building was great as well. I can't wait to read further about this, it was very unique one, highly recommended 💕

The story was interesting specially the character named Felix. The pacing was good just right fixed, the world building was top notch, and the character, didn't have full coverage about it yet, cause I only read up to chapter 10, I need to read further to fully put a complete review to the character, but like I said Felix is an interesting one. Over all, the story has a great potential to be contracted, thank you for your wonderful story Author, to more ink!

Good pacing, great world building, grammar its smooth but slight tweaks then it all will be polished. Punctuations and paragraph spacing were good but their are some parts that needed to fixed and adjust but it doesn't mean the story is bad. It was good, and I highly recommended it, 😊it has a potential to be contracted as it has a unique sense, and the author ideas was very refreshing in a sense that you could really relate to. Regarding the character not sure yet, as of now I only read few chapters, I still need to read further to see and understand the character deeply. Overall great work, to more ink!

Given the title, the novel explores the concept of a supernatural bond between a human and a demon, a trope that often involves themes of forbidden love, power struggles, and personal transformation. The story follows traditional paranormal romance structures, the protagonist face inner conflict, balancing fear and attraction toward the demon mate. The book also incorporate elements of dark fantasy, world-building that involves demonic lore, and high emotional stakes between the lead characters. The story was great and has potential to be contracted. The world building was good, although it can be tweaks a bit to be more clear and good. Over all, it was a wonderful story, just remember not to exaggerated everything that could turn to Clichy result, of ever avoid such. Great job, author, to more ink!

Author concept was unique and filled of life. The start was intriguing specially the first paragraph about a father, however I don't agree by what he said. Pain should be felt not be hidden, underneath, for ones keep the emotion hid, it's mental result will be at risk. It's all right cry and it's all right to be angry and screamed; however, we must control it a bit to not inflict other from it, make sure you balance the right and wrong, so you won't build a toxic treat to yourself and to others. The world building was top notch. I'm a person who analyze thing sin detailed and most importantly like it when I felt and see also what the character have felt and seen, in othe words, I like it when the story brings me dive deep to the world that the author is building. When it comes to grammar, I don't have much say to it, just do a slight tweaks then you'll be good to go. Your already good at it, keep it up! As of the words count. Readers here on Webnovel prefer 1k to 1,500 words in each chapter, maybe you can cut some parts and leave each chapters with cliff hanger, so that they will be intrigued further to read another chapters. Another thing, the I don't know if I remember it correctly but one of the rules in webnovel is to make things simple and the words easy to digest. When I see another language being put in your story, it got me curious yes, but it also made me remember, that in doing story in webnovel is better to put words that readers could be easily understand. But, the foreign language keep me curious indeed, so just do what you think is good for your story. I was just telling you the parts of doing story here, you don't have to be worried. Just do what you think work best on your story and your project. The story is already great, things flaws smoothly and pacing a bit slow but I understand it cause this story of yours is slow burn. You won't get tired of it though cause every details is intriguing and freshly laid for us readers whose use to read such detailed and emphasize thing. A bit suggestions if you could, when it comes to the character thought you can just put '_______' like that instead of "_____" to make things even clearer. Don't worry, this is just a suggestion you can do what you see best to yours. Overall, I could see a potential of this being contracted specially this pointed to ML audience. It's very popular here this days. Keep doing your thing, author, were just here rooting for you. To more ink! 🤗

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