Look up the scientific/medical references.

Specifically after FBI funded “honey traps” & “reverse honey traps”. Sex/love entrapment with 10 Black Guys. Yes, specific.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

I read this within 24 hrs, & really enjoyed it. However, it didn’ complete a full plot arc, so I hope the story continues to be published!

Me too. I burst out talking outlook at that point. “23, and acts mature for her age?”, or “Mature because she has 3 kids and has been solo parenting since age 15 while renting her families garage - i. e. the hard way to grow up while discovering family values??”

Ugh! Grab an Editor, ASAP! (Consider one of your first published sentence fragments, incomplete and crossing into another paragraph for possible starting points.) As for the story itself, Lin doesn’t recall when/how he transmigrated?! Was he two or younger? And is he currently 12 (one reference) or 18? Is he looking forward to being tested, based on one section, or recovering & implementing a fallback plan after failing, based on another? I’m confused, at least about this story. 1/5 Stars in present state, based on Chapter One.

And we likely start developing it while in the womb …

Why die tired & panic’d?

He can't even apply for Journeyman yet. Needs 3+ more solo designed mechs, plus gains on his style/dev model.

Keyword: should have been

Remember, on his page, Exlor says he’s planning to stretch this story ut to 10,000 chapters, and beyond. Down vote it HARD!

I never understand why you guys thank him for chapters, especially as this novel craters.

> doesn't deserve top 50.. Which equates to top 10,000+ on any reasonable platform, such as Amazon. I hope it's his contract clauses sinking his ship; he was slowly becoming a better writer. Sadly, I had purchased chapters way ahead so likely will read through 1,000 but I'm not investing more or voting for or recommendding this book unless it improves DRAMATICALLY.

For the people skipping chapters, obviously! Feel like an idiot now? (instead of merely looking the part)

Yes. Author retconning the world/system for a mild fight scene, a result achievable by other means.

If the aother does something with this new character, who I’m ipressed with besides just assassinate her as a mini-boss, it wouldn’t be filler.

Just smart enough to feed the machines, mainly.

The author has bragged (?) publicly on Discord about ignoring & not reading his ovel’s comments, since he assumes we are all whiners & haters. As such, I've stopped voting for his novels.

Me too. The writing, the plotting, the lack of consistency with the original character/etc. designs! This would have been FAILED by my midddle-school English writing instructor.

Yet hasn't yet transferred it to Iris, & likely won’t by his own admittance.