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really makes u think how she survived till now with her young "master" personality.
nah what sukuna did was mold his own technique in a way that it can hit gojo, he already knew he could kill gojo with his own technique but just didn't know how. This here seems like tatsuya from mahouka as he could analyze all about the matter and spells from the information dimension and then use his innate magic of decomposition in variety of ways like material burst for matter and he destroys casted spells manually using gram dispersion or cast jamming
so much cold in a single chap...my eyes are freezing in 44 degree temp, HELP
a theory about origin of magic is flawed due to arrogance...sure...so if he was not arrogant then the theory won't be flawed???
i don't know how u get more powerful than being able to create monsters with virtually any ability in any amount
not only that but also this guy deliberately picked fight with nevile while using a special grade meant as a trump card against 6 eyes and still in the end was fuming cause nevile struck a nerve.
and you still made him act like a moron with him going head to head with the bearers of the two most broken techniques to ever exist without having any sure counter to them and without a plan. And what does he gain from risking so much? jackshit that's what. He also won't get any idea about their strength as they are fucking brats with 0 experience so if you can then please author explain this...Sorry for the rant but this is getting irritating for quite some time now as the author is constantly stroking rose's ego and making asterion an extremly proud and cold brat with such a high ego while only having embarrassing defeats against everyone with all the antagonists being heinous morons.
I very much doubt that kenjaku ripoff would try to fight six eyes bearer without having a way to neutralize infinity and even if he was just testing the waters he won't be agitated as shown here, especially when the opponent is a kid with negligible fighting experience compared to him, but ig u do u
its shaping well but just don't let our mc be tied down due to the possibility of revealing himself or because of these shi**y morons interfering with his training. Nen has very very high potential if we take the dark continent's residents as a benchmark. Most fics don't make use of nen corectly and take netero as the upper limit. For theoritical part you can take inspiration from reincarnator's tavern fic. just a suggestion
I mean it wasn't even in the lake but just a small patch of land in that 'huge' lake.
I mean i get that is one way to look at it but personally i like to think that the dark continent would be much much scarier and devastating than described in manga and all that cause i don't believe for even a second that humans managed to explore even 0.0001 percent of it , and the so called "five calamities" might just be some normal 'noble' species if you will with their own territories who knows what might be the upper limit of powers in that unexplored hell on earth. Also Meruem with all that power on his belt died just because of a nuke which might not be enough to take down just a sappling of world tree which who knows might just be a little taller tree in that hell hole
hey just want to ask if Cynthia and ace gonna get together or will the dynamic btw them remain same? though i really want Cynthia and ace to get together...pls
oh so starting with surviving reality bending monsters, cool
The story is shaping well but just don't introduce sukuna ripoff too early as in jjk only japan was the centre of all events even mostly tokyo kyoto etc, so if you can then try to introduce characters from all over the world as it can give you more writing material and also give it a different feel from just a jjk and hp mix like in the arcane thief the author introduced new ocs and all and that made it so much more fun