RasyaHelion
Likes romance and science fictions. My knowledge is as vast and shallow as a salt pan.
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Bruh. He's just doing it for fun seeing the gentlemen that looks straight out of a fantasy cosplays.
Because he expected something different?
lol actually didn't know that. Maybe I'll integrate it into the lore
It's just based on the traditional Indian throwing weapon. Fused with the ability to control it like a drone.
Kid's talk...
Legendary professional F1 racer Ayrton Senna from Brazil. He was my favorite racer of all time.
Early review here. Looking at the prologue, the tone seemed quite dark. Fans of those types of stories would like this. Grammar is quite fine with only minor issues, though some words are somewhat hard to understand. Still very early, however, hope the author will improve as the chapters progress more. Keep it up!
It's fact. It's not body shame.
Yes, please...
Time to give the critic a critique of his own! As a fan of isekai works, this book's totally in range of my love zone. The comments are hilarious and relatable. They have great comedic potential. Keep it up, QV! Better update soon or the critique gonna be less pleasant, you hear me...[img=proud][img=proud][img=proud]
Well, well. I usually ain't one to view a book with heavy romance, but this one seems interesting. First, the good points: The world-building is top-class. Descriptive words conveyed what the setting is truly like. I like the royal atmosphere and this story allows me to experience that. Next, the not-so-good ones: I feel like many of the paragraphs are too long, and there are many punctuation errors. While the grammar is good, there are also too many repetitive pronouns. Still worth the read in my opinion. Check it out.
Guess that can be one way to see it.
Well, I'm gonna reply to my own question. No. Shame.
I love the comment my boy