LKingu

The chapters and writing style feel off, almost “artificial.” Honestly, I can’t read anymore.

This novel is interesting and well-paced. The characters aren’t fully flushed out as I’d like them to be, but they are more realistic and have their own lives. The main characters abilities were well designed and is interesting without being overly overpowered — the threats are actually dangerous and aren’t the usual face slapping troupe. It’s an enjoyable read for sure! I’d recommended it for those looking for a survival, apocalyptic, and horror-lite novel, with a decently advantaged mc.

Review: Quality (3) | Stability (4) | Story Development (2) | Character Design (2) | World-Building (2) The first ten chapters were relatively enjoyable, with some writing flaws and an occasionally irritating protagonist, but it served as a decent casual read. Unfortunately, the story started to decline after that. I follow the "rule of three strikes” on bad stories, and this story hits all I. Forced Character Actions:The characters often feel contrived, with decisions made to serve the plot rather than develop naturally. II. Poor World Integration: The mix of settings between LOTM nd Harry Potter was mishandled. I would’ve preferred a clearer, more consistent world-building approach by stricking being HP or at least introducing the LOTM more gradually. III. Overly Forced Plot: The story's progression feels too artificial, with key events like the MC’s accidental encounters, a sudden death of a potential adoptive parent, and the mentor’s untimely demise all leading to an abrupt introduction of a lady who expected the MC’s arrival, has heard a prophecy involving him, and who is also apparently a High Sequence Beyonder. This was honestly the one that ticked me off the most. The rushed pacing really detracts from the narrative, and all the “hints” and “foreshadowing” are awkward and offer no sibstance to the story — far too superficial. A more effective approach would have been to gradually introduce some aspects of LOTM, rather than overwhelming the reader with them early on. In comparison, THE DIRECT INSPIRATIONS, Harry Potter and LOTM subtly build toward their prophecies over time, which creates a more engaging and immersive experience than this fanfic. Overall, while this story isn’t for me, it’s still an improvement over some other works, like that dawn awfull **** **** stupid Isekai Dimensional Cube novel (I hate that novel).

Not really, I have a friend who likes this series about Alchemists with Metal Magic (I can’t remember the book name) but he loved the series but didn’t know Harry Potter. Honestly, I only knew of Harry Potter a couple years ago but knew Percy Jackson and Ricks other series long before Harry P.

This is Trash. The introduction was decent, it hooks you in with the main character in the body of a former genius with a damaged magical gate and enemies due to arrogance. Then the next few chapters completely ruin it with the MC in Danmachi, joining Loki (Top Guild), and getting four overpowered abilities. 1. Maxed Magic Affinity and Enhanced Power. 2. Faster Growth Rate than Bell (In everything) 3. Skill that makes him immune to all physical and mental status effects. 4. Can update his own stats with any divine blood (later chapters). Basically, the Main Character will be OP within a couple chapters and won’t even need Loki. Then it’s revealed the MC took “self defense” class in his previous life and was so talented he managed to beat a pack of wolves at night by himself (As if his immense magical energy and 4 abilities weren’t enough). And it doesn’t end there, what pisses me off the most is that all the characters are 2D, aren’t even the same characters, and lost a 100 IQ (They legit don’t question anything he does or has). Not to mention that the Author also doesn’t stray far from cannon plot (dimensions he visits) but they also use the most generic ones for their own Original Content. Read it if you like unoriginal plot, overpowered mcs, and dumb characters. But this is Trash.

What does grades have anything to do with awakening a System? Smh

I hope it doesn’t remain this short. Legit, the author or editors are just splicing 1,000+ words into two to three seperate chapters

I meant words

I literally read this within seconds, how many chapters is this? 500?

Why is it so short?