OK

It's the primary weapon of Guts from a Berserk

Yes, I need to work on my descriptions. That's why I decided that my first novel should be a fanfic. Since I've changed the setting a bit, I plan to fill it with my own stuff. So I don't describe Carne village that much, because I assume that people already know this and other places through anime and light novels.

Yeah I speed runed it, I just wanted to get to the new world as fast as possible. to be honest at first i Don't even have an plan what mc should be like.

Its just me being an nolife

Autor made so many Additional characters that it killed his uploads

You are right. I'll correct that part.

Hi. Im newbie novel writer, could you roast my book?

No

First chapter in my opinion is a complete trainwreck . Second definitely better quality . I hope that you my readers can give meconstructive criticism thanks to that i will improve faster. Good night/day.