the storyline is promising and the first chapter is written well

As someone who isn't knowledgeable on myths, I still enjoyed reading. I love how much details you incorporate into your work. I don't need to search them up because you're already explaining everything in your story. As someone who struggles to read lengthy works, not once did I get bored while reading. It's straight to the point but still interesting, you've balanced it pretty well. Good Job:)