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This is a very interesting concept with good worldbuilding and not much else. The characters feel more like devices for the plot, the writing (while being rather decent) is very inconsistent with how it feels, the grammar is fine, but nothing to write home about. Although, I personally like how the main character has a specific specialty in ranged combat instead of being good at everything. I'm interested to see how much the author will improve on these flaws, because behind them there's a truly intriguing idea. Keep it up, author!