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The AI ​​is used too obviously at times, and some chapters feel unnecessary to the plot, but overall I enjoyed the story, especially the later arcs. The first chapter with the MC's vows didn't convince me, particularly the use of the Force in Game of Thrones, which I found too powerful. But in the end, its use was generally subtle, so there was no Saitama or Mary Sue openly dominating Westeros. Finally, I would have liked more interaction and POVs of the Stark children as they grew up. If you can get past the AI ​​sections, I hope you enjoy reading it.

There's practically no difference in the plot compared to seasons 1 and 2. Except perhaps for the fact that Ayanokoji takes credit for all the strategic decisions from the original series, even though the decisions made by the original protagonists are far from optimal. This is odd for Ayanokoji, who's supposed to be the most intelligent person in his universe. Another negative point is Ayanokoji's passivity. I don't mind his not wanting attention, but letting so many (minor) elite Survey Corps characters die leaves me perplexed. He justifies it by saying he doesn't feel anything for anyone, but from a purely pragmatic standpoint, it's just a waste of talented human resources. Other problematic points are that almost literally every character with decision-making power hangs on his every word without offering any resistance (even Kenny). Erwin's behavior is understandable to a certain extent, but it's still strange because Ayanokoji implements the exact same plans as Canon Erwin (knowing that he has no knowledge of Attack on Titan in his world). The interactions with the Training Squad are also odd; the original characters tend to forget Ayanokoji's existence almost every chapter and only remember him to advance the plot (even if this might be justified later with Future Eren). On the plus side, there are no magical or overpowered abilities that allow him to kill a Titan with a single punch or a flaming sword, no chi/chakra or anything like that. And it's one of the few Attack on Titan fanfictions on Webnovel that, as a bonus, isn't a Chinese mtl.

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