wow cool story i must say. interesting choice of words , some spelling/grammatical errors which is understandable assuming that u do not care for some revisions. A LOT of scenarios are inappropriate and unacceptable, please be considerate of others feelings. i suggest that u write professionally and ethically. adding on to that, if u could please refrain from using vulgar words, then maybe i’ll think about giving u another star. that’s all. (reviewed professionally, only facts have been stated) -rated by jijinxcutieeee