Carmen_Kingsman
Writing
of reading
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The author wrote coolly. You can get into the atmosphere of the story and laugh with the characters. But I would advise to add more characters and add more sharp turns in the plot so that the readers are close to having a stroke.And so I wish the author patience to complete the book. We are with you bro)
what a cocky dude
he is not stupid!
Yeah
Ethan is cool, but he's worth killing for a hero
I'm from another world, what do you want?
I'm from another world, what do you want?
Something wrong bro
we are home
it's sounds cool
Oh, don't trust cute women, man!
running time
I would advise the author to add some characters that will make the story funnier, cool and not boring
it usually starts with this
Winner