kingsdog
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An entertaining story with a lot of potential. The characters so far are enjoyable and not heavy with stereotypes. I wouldn't call the world unique, but it achieves what its going for. If there is a negative that I can think of is I don't feel connected with the main character, although that is to be expected because its only six chapters in. overall a fun read, and will be coming back for the next chapter.
I'm sorry, its me again. liking the book I just think you should fix the mistake here. ( :
I dont mean to be rude or anything, but you should use found instead of find. But other than that i'm liking your book so far.