I didn't expect much at first and although the writing can improve but I'll give it a 5 star because of chapter 15. That chapter was lit yo, now one of my favorites is the first prince.
Empire's Secret: A Portal to the Cultivation World
If you are a new reader don't be fooled by the description and title. It is a great story with a great plot judging from the first few chapters. As long as the author doesn't flop it has potential to become a great novel. Give it a read I'm sure it won't disappoint.
This is very good the only thing I complain about is the lack of chapters. I don't really care about the writing that much because I'll improve anyway.