Thanks for the chapter!!! I didn't know you were back. Continue writing

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thanks for the chapter <3

Thanks for the chapter ❤️

oh sh**, KILL THE DOGS OF ETERNAL HEAVEN

Thanks for the chapter

Good chapter!

thanks for the chapter!!! The quality for writing the chapter has improved by leaps and bounds! I see that you took into account my previous comment, referring to the details of the scenes... That turned out really good! You are on the right track! Stay up the good work!

Thanks for the chapter. For the next chapters with fight scenes you can detail the moment of combat in more detail. Moviments performed, the sensations and emotions that each combatant has (shock, fear, bravey, madness, numb arms, racing heart, panting breathing, noises caused by blows, etc ...) In this way the fight becomes more exciting, as it forces us to imagine the details that you insert in the scene. Look at the fight chaptes that Mars writes, sometimes we see countless lines describing details of a single exchange of blows. I look forward to the next chapters

Nice chapter, but i'm still confused hahahahah. I look forward to the next chapter <3

Very good

nice chapter

This is a impressive writing quality. Remember how Mars write. Continue this job, it's so very good. I'm so excited to the next chapters! I believe that is history have a huge potential, becausa it explores an alternative timeline.