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siblings should be children. from mother's view, they should be children or kids. from female lead who is the eldest sister, they are siblings. in your sentence structure, it should be changed to children or kids.
Father is male so you should use "him".
That's wrong. if you tilt your head back during nosebleed, you run the risk of the blood clotting in your air passages. this will cause Asphyxiation. you tilt your head forward to avoid this.
That is why I put "?" at end just in case I was wrong. if I am sure I will end the sentence with "." thank you for the correction
thank God this is fiction. Tiger and wolf can't have babies. wolf and fox or dog. cat can with other felines not canines.
why do you keep calling biological mother, stepmother? this is wrong 😕
I think you mean "three years oldER" three years old is toddler. three years older mean 3 years later in time.
sounds like grouper.
isn't Yixiu the granddaughter? why is she calling her grandpa, husband? did I get the names wrong?
wounds NOT scars. she just created them mother should be wounds. scars are created after the scabs come off. scars last longer than wounds.
Lui is male. he cannot be niece-in-law. males can only be nephews and nephew-in-law.
minimum is 2 catties, but they get paid more. to punish them it should be one coin for 2 catties = 1/2 coin per catty. that is better punishment
sitting is verb, not a noun.
you cannot used Korean grammar format with English grammar. your current English grammar is similar to country bumpkin.
if you are raised in English speaking country, your language arts grades must be bad. if you are from non-English speaking country, you need better English editor.
there are excess words that make the sentence sound off. your grammar is off.
why are you calling biological father, stepfather ? just because he act like one does not make him one.
you have such good storyline, but your grammar really ruins it. do better