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SwordDomainGod13dPostedFirst issue with this fic is that it's clearly a Harem novel and yet there's no tag warning of this shit. Second issue is the girls losing 40 points of intelligence just by being near him. Third issue is the fact that the protagonist can literally create people to do shit for him. You may like it but it's not my thing. Besides those points it's quite good. The author kept the enthusiastic shouting of the transformation, the gadgets, and all that Japanese flavor of Kamen Rider. If not for everything else, it would be a solid 4.5 out 5. But my final evaluation is 3.4
- SwordDomainGod14dCommented
If this is a harem fic, please add this to the tag. When we decide to read something it's the tags that set up the expectations. Don't be surprised if many people start complaining about it later, cause without a warning, they will come expecting something entirely different. I myself will be quite disappointed as well. As I didn't read this expecting it to be a harem
'What do you mean? Aren't you already luring your two friends already? Gwen and Mary Jane are a great catch. If you manage to lure them in. you should be proud of yourself.' - SwordDomainGod16dReplied to WomboReader
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'And if it is to lessen his burden and responsibility he carries. I will help him.' Gwen thought and she began blushing a little. - SwordDomainGod16dReplied to Axus45_Bre
Sure, if you think suddenly falling in love with someone you don't know is alright.
'And if it is to lessen his burden and responsibility he carries. I will help him.' Gwen thought and she began blushing a little. - SwordDomainGod16dReplied to gamabunda4873
AI has an easily recognizable pattern and this definitely isn't AI
"As for how you died, you died trying to stop a suicide bomber from harming the place you worked at." Ah I don't remember much but I'm sure I did it on a whim. Maybe I was suicidal at that time? There's no better way to go than that. - SwordDomainGod16dCommented
I'm pretty sure this is only the second time she actively brought the topic onto the table.
"Your story is interesting Gwen. But you talk about Kamen Rider a lot. Do you have a crush on him perhaps?" Peter smirks teasing Gwen. When Gwen told her story she exaggerated a lot when she told Brave's feats. And Peter picked up on this. - SwordDomainGod16dCommented
Yeah, extremely forced
'And if it is to lessen his burden and responsibility he carries. I will help him.' Gwen thought and she began blushing a little. - SwordDomainGod16dCommented
I can definitely tell that there's AI working here
Gwen listened to Ace and sensed his unwavering conviction. She was filled with awe, marveling at the amazing qualities of the man before her. Despite possessing great power, he displayed no inclination to misuse it, instead dedicating himself to the service of others. Her respect for him grew even more. - SwordDomainGod16dCommented
To be honest, I don't think you needed that kind of thing, not to mention, AI doesn't know how to write. So even before reading, I humbly request that you don't use it anymore.
Used AI to improve some text tell me if it improves the work - SwordDomainGod16dReplied to blackRh
per week
She wore a black forehead protector of the leaf village on her forehead, a deep red jacket above a black shirt and gray shorts. - SwordDomainGod16dReplied to
about three to four chapters
She wore a black forehead protector of the leaf village on her forehead, a deep red jacket above a black shirt and gray shorts. - SwordDomainGod16dReplied to Rigchel
Does it matter? It also has feelings you know, I'm pretty sure those claws are great in many ways. Size doesn't matter that much.
It is 6 feet tall and has red eyes, inch-long claw-like fingernails, razor-sharp, pointed teeth, a long tail, and fur covering most of his body, giving him the appearance of a human rat. - SwordDomainGod17dReplied to sadanandha
She has a super soldier serum and can fight one to one against Captain America.
Kuuga turns back into his Mighty Form and walks to Black Widow. Kuuga checked her and saw she was fine and only slightly bruised. - SwordDomainGod17dReplied to JussMonty
That's only true as far as the current tech of the universe. Dr Octopus literally created clones of Peter. If it's possible to clone, it's also possible to replicate what happened to him artificially, just that, it might be vastly out of their reach when it comes to their era
"No, I'm sorry Ace-sama. I have not figured out how the genes of Peter-san and Gwen-san remain stable even though they have mutated. Normally the mutation will take over a person's genes until their DNA is completely taken over. But for Peter-san and Gwen-san. They somehow miraculously found the balance which will not harm them but only benefit them." - SwordDomainGod17dReplied to wahlfire
"Hey guys, don't you think it's weird that whenever Kamen Rider appears, Ace is nowhere to be seen? I mean, we all know what this is right? He's clearly hiding because he is shy of meeting his hero."
"Our age? No way! He has super-advanced armor, he has to be super rich and super genius for him to be our age." argued Ned - SwordDomainGod17dReplied to shinydecapod
JJ be like: See, he's breaking the laws of physics, I told you he is a criminal!
"They exploded on the bottom of the river. There was no damage." - SwordDomainGod17dReplied to Odil
So what? This literally happened at least ten times in the comics like Marvel and DC, even Superboy has a similar situation happening to him, not to mention Superman, just that there was no social media back in his day.
It is now the weekend. Ace has been getting close with Peter, Ned, and Gwen. Mary Jane has been getting closer to Ace. MJ has been seeking advice from Ace and occasionally hangs out. Ever since the cafeteria fight between Ace and Flash. Flash has lessened his bullying. The whole fight was recorded by some of the students and has been posted on social media. This increased Ace's popularity and everyone in school has been talking about him. The students respect him and Flash doesn't dare to confront him anymore after the one-sided beatdown. - SwordDomainGod17dReplied to AspiringPedo
It's his tokatsu spider sense doing this
"Peter, who is your new friend?" Aunt May asked nicely but was inwardly happy Peter had a new friend. Her nephew doesn't have many friends so she is happy he made another one. - SwordDomainGod17dReplied to AspiringPedo
Sasuke:
MJ was shocked and had to think more about Ace's words. MJ smiled "Thanks for the pep talk. You sound older than you look."