Good luck with your story. Also, thank you for the review.

Because Orion is cautious by nature. There was no proof behind her words.

I think you misunderstood. This is during the Dragon Rampage, where many town were destroyed by the dragon. This other child lost everything, and they took her in also. There was pity, maybe, but never did they condemned the child. Again, oppression is used for describing how the world came to currently be.

Yes. Saviors are just stronger people, capable of fighting the Apostles. The only problem is that there isn't many factions remaining on the continent. And Apostles are 14 in total. There's only a handful of strong people besides them on the continent.

There is something that forces Dylan from taking Orion with him.

Exactly. I had planned for 28 years approximately.

That is covered in a few more chapters. Else, the story would never start.

That would have been terrible. Really.

Because the 'balance' is an excuse to an end.

The introduction of the story is partially over exaggerated. It was there as history written by the human faction. Most of what was written was true for the beginning of the oppression, not at the current time of the story. And no one was specifically looking for the child either, because no one survived.

Plot device. I needed Karteira to trust Orion, which she wasn't completely at that point. The problem with the corrupted is that you don't know how many cores they have. If Orion broke those two cores, and a third appeared, it would have been too late. By standing behind, he would have acted as backup for such case.

This is perfectly valid, since those were pretty much my worries too. I thought of ways to make it seem less unnatural, and what I came up with was the chapters after it. The point of the underground, is, a swarm. Believe it or not, in a small room, there is not much freedom. Thank you for commenting.

I am glad to hear that the setting is to your liking. I hope it will be a satisfying read for you. Have a nice day. -Tsuna_Reiuji

Wow, that's one bad word there. xD

Thank you for pointing this out, I'll be sure to correct this.

Yes, it did change color when her magic went berserk. It returned to normal after.

Thanks you very much for your kind words and your time. As you said, the focus was not his childhood. I am glad that I was able to give enough details in these early chapters and that it feels just enough. I sincerely hope you will have a good time reading the rest of the story. Have a nice day. -TsunaReiuji

If it is physically, he his still looking like it's parents. If it is the factions traits, then I purposefully decided to negate them as 'pillar birth' magic. But let me just clarify this, the factions traits are still present, but for them to be showed, he will need more time. So, yes. It's basically camouflage from the magic, which reverts back when he himself uses magic. There is so much I could use to explain why I made such a choice, but if you have any other question, feel free to ask. I hope it helped. Have a nice day. -Tsuna_Reiuji