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Incredible story, with wonderful world and character development rarely seen in other similar stories. Reading this story is basically a lesson in physics and chemistry, it is impressive how Roland adapts modern technology and integrates it into this world quickly using the powers of witches and allying with them. This is a novel that was truly worth every bit of time spent, with you left feeling sad when it ends. I highly recommend it for those who value good world development and a fascinating and incredible protagonist.
I was also disappointed with the conflict with the phoenix woman, she threatened to make her children abuse the goddess and then manages to resolve the situation and get out of the whole problem, political and warlike, with just a slap on the wrist, it's really quite disappointing, in the end. In the future, this threat that she made to the goddess is not even mentioned. Her children, who the MC killed, were irrelevant characters and she didn't even care about it. In fact, the feeling is that the clash between the two was discarded just for her to enter Aqua's harem in the future.
Okay, I think it's dangerous and an unnecessary risk, but it's your story.
But following that logic, if you let the people who keep slavery alive, wouldn't they just go waiting for the opportunity to stab Daeron in the back, wouldn't it be easier to eradicate the evil in the bud? There might be some issues, I admit, but in the long run it would be much better.
He doesn't need to go out burning everyone, just the margiteiros and nobles, they are the ones who maintain this system of slavery, why not kill all those in power and confiscate their wealth to keep the economy stable?
It would be interesting. But in my opinion, a Visenya twin at the time of the conquest would be even more so, there are very few stories about the conquest, and the few that do exist are usually about the return of Jon Snow, and I really don't like that fool. I also think that at the time of the conquest you would have more space to create new things since there is so little information about that time.
Thanks for the chapter Author. I would like to leave a story suggestion for you, an MC reborn as the twin brother of Queen Visenya Targaryen, it would be epic the two could conquer Essos and form a new Valyrian empire. Without the harem, the MC's only love interest would be Visenya (because she's the best Targaryen ever, and anyone who disagrees is an idiot, with all due respect to idiots). Please think about it, I think you could make an excellent story.
Yes, I studied about these battles, the English practically disabled the French cavalry. And in Westeros they use a lot of cavalry charge, an army with only the best archers would be great.
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Man, you have some really cool phrases.
Thanks for the chapter Author-sama.
I think Daeron should be grateful every day for being born to look like his mother, seriously Targaryens are very hot.
Yes, they are described as the most advanced civilization that ever existed on that world, it must have been something incredible, just by the architecture of them in an outpost like Dragonstone you can see how advanced they were.
I still don't understand him asking for the compass, he could literally ask for anything and he asks for a compass?