Kurapika_Kuruta

I can't believe this story has finally come to an end. It's not perfect, it has many problems, there are moments that feel repetitive, but still...It's the best Dragon Ball story on this platform; I really enjoyed reading it, and following it from the beginning was a very pleasant experience.

I know it's most likely a translation from Chinese, but throughout this chapter it constantly switches from qillin to unicorn; although they are creatures with some resemblance, they are quite different.They are fundamentally different in both appearance and abilities, so I would appreciate it if you could choose one.

I plan to continue it, I just haven't had the time yet, although if I did it would be in Spanish since English isn't my strong suit

Honestly, the story is interesting, but I'm afraid it'll turn into a harem, since the protagonist brought a lot of girls into the guild who didn't originally belong there, and they have quite a bit of...relevance But I'm leaving aside the guys who weren't originally part of the guild; I'm not looking for Jellal or any male Dragon Slayer, and those who did join the guild, like Lion or Kagura's brother, are also excluded In the end they left the guild

The fanfic is good, but... Momo's power is the biggest plot convenience I've ever seen. It doesn't even follow the logic of the original quirk since it creates enormous structures. And all at high speed, without even getting tired, and the super soldier serum doesn't justify it since Momo's quirk depends on lipids so the protagonist should be swallowing more than Luffy To justify everything he does

If you don't mind, I'd like to continue writing this story, albeit with some modifications.

Interesting but it doesn't make sense, an Allmight without being able to use Ofa went toe to toe with Abomination causing more damage than the Hulk himself and then knocked him out with 5%, it doesn't make any sense.

Honestly, the whole Transformers plot seems unnecessary to me, it's like two different fanfics forcibly united.

It's a pretty interesting story, really, haha.Although it would have been better if they continued on their own, but I won't deny that it has its appeal that the protagonist and his group join Luffy.

Okay, curious. Are children also transmigrants? Or is there something else going on?